User talk:TheLegendaryBrick

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According to SW:TALK, users should sign their posts with four tildes (~~~~) whenever they comment on a talk page. The second thing is musings shouldn't be discussed on talk pages (like discussing who's going to be ranked 1st ) as it's basically irrelevant. NPM Morr!? 03:47, December 29, 2024 (EST)

Another thing about talk pages; you can't remove your comments unless it was immediately after you post. If someone else had already responded to your comment, then you cannot remove the comment. CookiesCreme 01:14, January 11, 2025 (EST)

Regarding your recent introduction edits

Hey, first I want to thank you for adding the intros for the characters that are missing one. They have been good so far, but there are some things to note:

• Please link any mentioned special moves or player names; I've noticed you barely link any when there should be (eg. Pyra and Mythra's pages not linking the Smasher names). Linking to normal moves (such as up tilt) is not necessary, only the special moves should.
• Remove the "This article is incomplete" tag; I've checked all the pages you wrote intros for and they're all still there. They're way up top and look like "{incomplete|Introduction}" (with two brackets).
• Italicize game titles like Brawl or Smash 4.
• Avoid editorial or overly casual phrases (eg. Mii Gunner's page having "their recovery can be intercepted by many characters (a lot more than you think)".

Also, focus on getting to the point: an intro should be short and concise. If it gets too detailed that it could be put in the attributes section instead, then shorten it.

Example: "Finally, their normal moves are also with utility. Their up and down tilts are viable KO options, their forward tilt and neutral aerial serve as get-off-me options, their forward aerial is a great tool with many purposes (zoning, edge guarding, etc.), and their forward smash and up aerial have some of the best range in their respective categories." Get-off-me options are not very notable, and forward aerial, forward smash and up aerial points can be condensed into one.

Shortened: "Finally, their normal moves have good utility, with most of them either possessing excellent knockback (such as up and down tilts) or very high range (such as their forward aerial, up aerial and forward smash)." Gets to the point quicker with less words.

I hope this helps you if you are considering editing any of your intros in the future, but good job overall. Mexi (talk) 08:48, May 3, 2025 (EDT)