User talk:Jayden.grieve

Smasher pages

A heads up, Smasher pages are supposed to document a player’s contribution to the Smash scene. It is not supposed to document someone’s personal life. CookiesCreme 01:12, July 10, 2022 (EDT)

In the article guide under the history section it says "A detailed synopsis of the subject's history with Smash, starting from when and how they got into Smash and its competitive scene." I believe the information is very relevant to the players history with the game and how they got into it. Especially regarding their relationship with the game and their eventual retirement. Perhaps we can come to an agreement on what information can be added? --Jayden.grieve (talk) 13:38, July 10, 2022 (EDT)

"A detailed synopsis of the subject's history with Smash" does not equate to "detailing his personal life." While some parts of his personal life affected his Smasher career, the way it's worded and structured, your additions comes off as focusing more on his personal life rather than how it affects his tournament career. A lot of what's added should be summarized or shortened so it could be added to the tournament history section; having a specific "personal life" section is unnecessary in that case, especially when some of the information in that section is redundant. CookiesCreme 20:13, July 10, 2022 (EDT)