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Also a side thing I want to note involving your links to exterior sites for descriptions such as spinning backfists, spread-eagle poses and the like; in my opinion, I think we should have as little of these animation descriptions as possible unless its something extremely unknown (eg. Ryu's back throw being a tomoe nage). It was most obvious in this: | Also a side thing I want to note involving your links to exterior sites for descriptions such as spinning backfists, spread-eagle poses and the like; in my opinion, I think we should have as little of these animation descriptions as possible unless its something extremely unknown (eg. Ryu's back throw being a tomoe nage). It was most obvious in this: | ||
''{{change|Donkey Kong is much more expressive. He now smiles with his [[wikipedia:Pursed lip breathing|lips pursed]] during his self-congratulatory [[victory pose]], he sports a tooth grin during his backflip victory pose, [[wikipedia:Gorilla#Communication|chest-beating]] victory pose, and {{GameIcon|ssb4-3ds}}and side taunt, he scowls during his down aerial and up [[taunt]], he appears confused during his down taunt, his irises [http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/WideEyesAndShrunkenIrises shrink] when he is hit, [[grab]]bed, [[screen KO]]'d, or when an opponent escapes his [[grab]], and his [http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/EyePop eyes comically bulge outward] when he is launched. Most of Donkey Kong's animations are also more fluid.}}'' | ''{{change|Donkey Kong is much more expressive. He now smiles with his [[wikipedia:Pursed lip breathing|lips pursed]] during his self-congratulatory [[victory pose]], he sports a tooth grin during his backflip victory pose, [[wikipedia:Gorilla#Communication|chest-beating]] victory pose, and {{GameIcon|ssb4-3ds}}and side taunt, he scowls during his down aerial and up [[taunt]], he appears confused during his down taunt, his irises [http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/WideEyesAndShrunkenIrises shrink] when he is hit, [[grab]]bed, [[screen KO]]'d, or when an opponent escapes his [[grab]], and his [http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/EyePop eyes comically bulge outward] when he is launched.<ref>[https://miiverse.nintendo.net/posts/AYMHAAACAABnUYnjrQ_heQ Pic of the Day: February 12, 2014]</ref> Most of Donkey Kong's animations are also more fluid.}}'' | ||
As you can see, the blue links clutter out actual links within the wiki and are linking to a lot of non smash-related articles. This is just my own constructive criticism; if you want to keep adding links like that, by all means keep doing so, but try not to overload descriptive words with links to an example. It's still all really good work! [[User:Archrelico|Archrelico]] ([[User talk:Archrelico|talk]]) 12:16, 27 August 2017 (EDT) | As you can see, the blue links clutter out actual links within the wiki and are linking to a lot of non smash-related articles. This is just my own constructive criticism; if you want to keep adding links like that, by all means keep doing so, but try not to overload descriptive words with links to an example. It's still all really good work! [[User:Archrelico|Archrelico]] ([[User talk:Archrelico|talk]]) 12:16, 27 August 2017 (EDT) | ||
