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There is currently a cleanup tag for this page saying that it needs to be written like more informational than a storybook. I'd like to know how we can incorporate factual information. And besides, we should have a summary of the plot ''somewhere'' on this wiki. [[User talk:Ac2k|<font color="Red">'''''Ac2k'''''</font>]] 20:36, 6 March 2013 (EST) | There is currently a cleanup tag for this page saying that it needs to be written like more informational than a storybook. I'd like to know how we can incorporate factual information. And besides, we should have a summary of the plot ''somewhere'' on this wiki. [[User talk:Ac2k|<font color="Red">'''''Ac2k'''''</font>]] 20:36, 6 March 2013 (EST) | ||
:Storybook refers to unnecessary details such as [http://www.ssbwiki.com/index.php?title=Adventure_Mode:_The_Subspace_Emissary&diff=457370&oldid=457366 pointless character descriptions and plot descriptions]. There is a difference between "Jack and Jill went to the farm" and "Jack, a young boy, and Jill, a young girl, went to the farm, which was away from the rest of the world." We would want to strive for the second one, but this is a Wiki, so if you wanted to know what Jack looked like, you'd click on the link to his page. In a similar fashion, if you wanted to know who Kirby was, you could click on his article. Long story short, remove unnecessary details if you see any more of it. <span style="font-family:Forte">[[User:Megatron1|<span style="color:maroon">Mega</span>]][[User talk:Megatron1|<span style="color:silver">Tron1</span>]][[User:Megatron1/Laughology|<span style="color:blue">XD</span>]]</span>[[File:Decepticon.png|19px]] 20:55, 6 March 2013 (EST) | :Storybook refers to unnecessary details such as [http://www.ssbwiki.com/index.php?title=Adventure_Mode:_The_Subspace_Emissary&diff=457370&oldid=457366 pointless character descriptions and plot descriptions]. There is a difference between "Jack and Jill went to the farm" and "Jack, a young boy, and Jill, a young girl, went to the farm, which was away from the rest of the world." We would want to strive for the second one, but this is a Wiki, so if you wanted to know what Jack looked like, you'd click on the link to his page. In a similar fashion, if you wanted to know who Kirby was, you could click on his article. Long story short, remove unnecessary details if you see any more of it. <span style="font-family:Forte">[[User:Megatron1|<span style="color:maroon">Mega</span>]][[User talk:Megatron1|<span style="color:silver">Tron1</span>]][[User:Megatron1/Laughology|<span style="color:blue">XD</span>]]</span>[[File:Decepticon.png|19px]] 20:55, 6 March 2013 (EST) | ||
::Thanks! [[User:Ac2k|<span style="color: red;">'''Awesome'''</span>]] [[User talk:Ac2k|<span style="color: red;">'''Cardinal'''</span>]] [[Special:Contributions/Ac2k|<span style="color: red;">'''2000'''</span>]] 14:22, 9 March 2013 (EST) | |||
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Okay, we need a lot of help here. I'll see if I can import some pages. Ultrasonicfan 21:41, 1 October 2010 (EDT)
Someone should work on this. The page on Mario wiki is a lot tidier, better looking and easier to read. I would help but this is a bit too big for me, good luck. www.mariowiki.com/Adventure_Mode:_The_Subspace_Emissary
Cleanup
There is currently a cleanup tag for this page saying that it needs to be written like more informational than a storybook. I'd like to know how we can incorporate factual information. And besides, we should have a summary of the plot somewhere on this wiki. Ac2k 20:36, 6 March 2013 (EST)
- Storybook refers to unnecessary details such as pointless character descriptions and plot descriptions. There is a difference between "Jack and Jill went to the farm" and "Jack, a young boy, and Jill, a young girl, went to the farm, which was away from the rest of the world." We would want to strive for the second one, but this is a Wiki, so if you wanted to know what Jack looked like, you'd click on the link to his page. In a similar fashion, if you wanted to know who Kirby was, you could click on his article. Long story short, remove unnecessary details if you see any more of it. MegaTron1XD
20:55, 6 March 2013 (EST)
