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== Changing a line in his "Changes from Smash 4" section == | == Changing a line in his "Changes from Smash 4" section == | ||
'''"Bowser has earned great representation in ''Ultimate''{{' | '''"Bowser has earned great representation in ''Ultimate''{{'}}s early metagame, thanks to players such as {{Sm|LeoN}}, who has taken sets off of top players like {{Sm|Nairo}}, {{Sm|Cosmos}}, {{Sm|Marss}}, {{Sm|Dabuz}} and {{Sm|Light|p=Connecticut}}."''' | ||
I'm changing the line, as of the moment I'm writing this discussion, to '''"Thanks to this, Bowser has earned great representation in ''Ultimate''{{'}}s competitive play, thanks to players such as {{Sm|LeoN}}, who has taken sets off of many notable top players in tournament play."''', since his most notable names are listed in the "In competitive play" section already. [[User:Beep|<font color="Black">'''Beep'''</font>]] [[User talk:Beep|<font color="Black">'''(talk)'''</font>]] 16:12, December 9, 2019 (EST) | I'm changing the line, as of the moment I'm writing this discussion, to '''"Thanks to this, Bowser has earned great representation in ''Ultimate''{{'}}s competitive play, thanks to players such as {{Sm|LeoN}}, who has taken sets off of many notable top players in tournament play."''', since his most notable names are listed in the "In competitive play" section already. [[User:Beep|<font color="Black">'''Beep'''</font>]] [[User talk:Beep|<font color="Black">'''(talk)'''</font>]] 16:12, December 9, 2019 (EST) | ||
: Sounds good. Just as a general bit of advice, by the way: you don't have to write talk page entries for this kind of thing unless someone undoes it and you want to explain your reasoning. ~ [[User:Serena Strawberry|<span style="color: #e68;">'''Serena Strawberry'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Serena Strawberry|talk]]) 16:22, December 9, 2019 (EST) | : Sounds good. Just as a general bit of advice, by the way: you don't have to write talk page entries for this kind of thing unless someone undoes it and you want to explain your reasoning. ~ [[User:Serena Strawberry|<span style="color: #e68;">'''Serena Strawberry'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Serena Strawberry|talk]]) 16:22, December 9, 2019 (EST) |
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