User talk:Mr. Anon/SSE novelization/Chapter 2

Um... I thought he rescued Peach? -- Roy boy  X   Talk  08:22, 5 October 2011 (EDT)

Here's some mistake...
''Kirby gazed at the cage he had just knocked away. Inside it was Princess Peach, and though weary looking, she did not appear to be hurt very much. As he helped her out of his cage, he heard a thud. Turning around, Kirby and Peach saw a very fat man, slightly resembling Mario, standing in the center of the platform. The man, whose hat bore the word "W", for his name Wario, approached Princess Zelda, who was still getting out of her page. In Wario's hands was a huge object that looked like the head of a dragon. He seemed to pull a lever on the object, and Kirby saw it shaking as though it was charging up. Finally, in an instant that felt like forever, a black arrow-shaped beam shot out, hitting Zelda. The Princess dropped to the ground, trophyfied. Before Kirby or Peach could stop him, Wario dashed over to Zelda's trophy, grabbed it, and jumped away from the stadium, laughing. The Star Warrior suddenly heard a beeping noise behind him. To his shock he saw that the strange sphere dropped by the Ancient Minister only had a few seconds left on its timer. Whatever was going to happen at the end, it was not going to be good. Knowing he only had one strategy left, he grabbed Zelda's hand with one of his hands, and held his cell phone in other other. Tightly gripping Zelda, he jumped with her off the stadium platform, just as the timer hit zero. As the pair drifted away in Kirby's Warp Star, they saw a massive black hole explode out of nowhere, consuming the stadium...''

the bold one needs to be fixed -[-=-]-Lucas -IV- '''An Enderman! Sh-SMACK!  11:24, 5 October 2011 (EDT)
 * Thank you. I have fixed that mistake. Do you have any other feedback? Mr.  Anon MatchupUnknown.png talk   20:12, 5 October 2011 (EDT)