User talk:174.21.123.240

Writing Style
A lot of your edits seem to be missing the mark, either because your trivia is off or because your writing style is poor. We strongly suggest you read MOS and TRIV before making any further edits. Thanks! Black Vulpine (talk) 22:51, 26 April 2017 (EDT)

Good work. You're doing better already. Try to make all your edits in one go, however, rather than just hitting submit every time you change something on a page. Remember, you can see how your edit looks before saving it by using the Show preview button. Never forget to proofread. It makes it easier for you and for everyone else. Black Vulpine (talk) 23:04, 26 April 2017 (EDT)

Your edits on the Samus page have missed the mark again. In fact, you have repeated mistakes that we already talked about. Your efforts are appreciated, but avoid making the same edits repeatedly, as this is against wiki policy. If someone reverts your edits and you disagree with that decision, go to the article's talk page and write a new section. Black Vulpine (talk) 23:31, 29 April 2017 (EDT)
 * Sentences should not be led with conjunctions like 'and', 'or' and 'but'. Use 'However', 'In addition' or 'Otherwise' instead.
 * In regards to the colours, saying 'is unable to use' is less readable and takes up more space than 'does not use'.

A couple of things
Please read both our manual of style and our trivia policy before continuing. You also may want to brush up on your English because you are making a bunch of grammar mistakes as well. Thanks, and have a good day.  Serpent   King  03:55, 3 May 2017 (EDT)

You've ignored me. You get one more warning, shape up now or I'm blocking you.  Serpent   King  01:22, 4 May 2017 (EDT)